Jewel in the Skull

Michael Moorcock, The Jewel in The Skull (DAW 1977) Moorcock's Jewel In The Skull is the first book in the runestaff series of novels. Unlike most fantasy tales this story takes place thousands of years in Earth's future. For some reason not described in the book, western civilization collapsed during a period known as the Tragic Millennium. During this time modern civilization was replaced by a new feudalism very similar to the system that dominated Europe during the Middle Ages. Magic is in use and plays an important role in society and the landscape is populated by many strange, monstrous creatures.The continent of Europe is now divided into many micro kingdoms. Modern advanced technology has disappeared and has been replaced by Iron Age technology and weapons. The one exception to this rule is the evil empire of Granbretan which is a totalitarian state located on the island of Great Britain. Granbretan's technology is slightly more advanced than that which is in use on the continent. For example the Granbretans have flying machines. The Granbretans have used this tech advantage to conquer the very fractionalized nations of Europe and place them under their harsh yoke. One of Granbretan's leaders, Baron Meliadus attempts to use the book's hero, Dorian Hawkmoon in an attempt to avenge the insult dealt to him by another of the books main characters, Count Brass. Hawkmoon is another of Moorcock's Eternal Champions, the metaphysically related heroes who populate many of Moorcock's novels. Throughout this book Hawkmoon leads an army in battle, fights monsters and duels against mighty foes. The Hawkmoon character is very different as compared to Elric. Hawkmoon isn't as dark a character as Elric. He fights to liberate is country and free his people. In this sense Hawkmoon is more of a traditional Fantasy hero. This book is a sample of Moorcock's earlier work and as such lacks some of the literary subtleness that I have come to love in his later works. The characters seem to be more standard in nature and somewhat predictable in behavior. Despite this however Moorcock demonstrates once again his mastery of the English language and as a result one finds it difficult to put the book down. I must admit that I am not very comfortable with the idea of a futuristic iron age. I guess it's just my 21st century mind refusing to accept the idea of a society without electric lights and super highways. If one needs to write a tale of medieval fantasy then why not place it in the middle ages where it belongs ? Never the less, The Jewel in The Skull is a wonderful book and I look forward to reading the other books in this saga.

Michael Moorcock, The Jewel in the Skull (DAW, 1967)Dorian Hawkmoon, the last Duke of Koln, is another of Moorcock's instances of the Eternal Champion. Hawkmoon's tales are especially amusing, as the world on which Hawkmoon adventures is the nearest allegory to the world we know in Moorcock's sword-and-sorcery writing. Count Brass, protector of the south-Provence country of Kamarg, is content to be left in peace in his castle as the Dark Empire sweeps down over Europe from the island nation of Granbretan. His neutrality is questioned by an emissary from Granbretan, Baron Meliadus. While Meliadus is at Brass' castle, he falls in love with Brass' daughter Yisselda, and attempts to kidnap her. Meliadus is forcibly ejected from the Kamarg, and begins to plot revenge.That's where Hawkmoon enters the story, but to say how would be to spoil the fun. Read it for yourself.The Hawkmoon novels are, of the "classic" Eternal Champion books (Elric, Corum, Hawkmoon, John Daker, and Erekose), those which best approach the brilliance of the Elric series. Where the problems lie in the DAW editions are in the pervasive and annoying typographical errors. Someone at DAW was asleep at the wheel the day The Jewel in the Skull landed on their desk. Hardly a page goes by without an ugly typo that, if the reader is skimming, will change the meaning of a sentence. Very sloppy work from the publisher. Unfortunately, Murphy's Law dictates that the better the book, the more likely this sort of thing is to happen. And make no mistake, The Jewel in the Skull is a very good book. Would that it had been treated as such by its publisher. *** ½

The vigor and richness of the writing, the ironic sub-texts and use of current political and entertainment figures of the day, the fact that each of the four books in the series took three days to write (i.e. the whole thing took twelve days) and were not taken with any great seriousness by the author, make these the first and the best. David Eddings, Robert Jordan and the rest simply don't have the raw genius to produce throw-away books of this quality. Moorcock wrote these, like the Kane novels, as an homage to his childhood pulp enthusiasms and they have inspired rafts and rafts of imitators. This is the first book of the set now generally available as HAWKMOON, which are nice editions and rather better value than buying the books individually. They are also introduced and lightly revised by Moorcock who has said many times that these early fantasy books were like the early days of rock and roll -- you were experimenting as you worked and your main job was to keep the audience dancing. Hawkwind and their Chronicles albums came out of this series, too. However many authors have taken their buckets to Moorcock's well, they can never drain him of his originality, his vitality and his sheer, glorious intelligence.

It's a 3 1/2 story but I gave it 4 stars as I felt some of the reviewers were too harsh.OVERALL FEELING: Evil Empire trying to take over an alternative European world; standard pulp swords and sorcery; easy read; somewhat good; few interesting points; some interesting characters; some are caricatures; flows well.MARKETING APPEAL: This story came about in the 60s, I believe, when pulp sci fi magazines were a big thing; I doubt it made a lot of money at first but the Eternal Champion, most notably Elric and Corum, were a popular series. Remember, this was during a time when fantasy was just getting some notice but mostly in pulp magazines. Besides Tolkien and Le Sprague de Camp and a handful of others, there weren't that many.SCORING: Superb (A), Excellent (A-), Very good (B+), Good (B) Fairly Good (B-) Above Average (C+), Mediocre (C ), Barely Passable (C-) Pretty Bad (D+), Dismal (D), Waste of Time (D-), Into the Trash (F)DIALOGUE: B STRUCTURE: B- HISTORY SETTING: C CHARACTERS: B EVIL SETUP/ANTAGONISTS: B- EMOTIONAL IMPACT: C+ SURPRISES: B- MONSTERS: B- PACING: B+ THE LITTLE THINGS: B OVERALL STYLE: B- FLOW OF WORDS: B CHOICE OF FOCUS: B- TRANSITIONS/FLASHBACKS/POV: B- COMPLEXITY OF WORDS/SYMBOLISM/THEMES: B-OVERALL GRADE: B- CONCEPT: The idea of a technologically mixed Eurpean area, which exists thousands of years into the future, is an interesting one. During the 60s to 70s one could easily believe the world was destroyed by nuclear warheads and the results ended up in a future medieval Europe with magic and technology. Archetypes are heavy (see below for more details) . . . at its time, it was quite original.CHARACTERS: they're average to very good.DIALOGUE: Again, as character introspection is rare in this tale, it's reflected, to some degree, in dialogue. See the CHARACTER section on this point. Overall, the dialogue flowed well and the characters sounded somewhat different. But, no one stood out exceptionally like in better series like that of GRRM or even lesser ones like Kate Elliot's THE KING'S DRAGON.PACING: The book is sparse to begin with; only 160 pages . . . but it moves quick. I think the pacing is great. Of course, the pacing is so good b/c Moorcock doesn't give us a lot of details. Everything is brief . . . succinct . . . he should be writing scripts. Sometimes though; I'd like more details. Have to be fair here in comparison to authors who have meatier texts; 160 pages; it's easier to move fast compared to 900 pages as the typical epic fantasy. Back when Moorcock was writing, novels were shorter and would be considered almost novelettes today. By the 70s and 80s the fantasy novels shot up to 400 or 500 pages. Since RJ's WHEEL OF TIME series, the novels have shot up to 800 pages or so per book.FAVORITE DESCRIPTIVE PASSAGE: "The castle was built of the same white stone as the houses of the town. It had windows of thick glass (much of it painted fancifully) and ornate towers and battlements of delicate

I enjoyed this book very much. It grabbed me from from the start and I couldn't put it down. Moorcock creates a fascinating society in decadent Granbretan and sweeps you along with his vivid writing. Very reminiscent of the Elric series, only not as dark. Try it!